Manuscript evaluation

Congratulations on completing your fiction manuscript! Now that you’ve taken the most significant step, you can receive a detailed evaluation encompassing plot structure, character development, pacing, and more. 

I go beyond surface-level observations, providing in-depth feedback to help you enhance every aspect of your narrative.

  • Receive feedback on character depth, growth, and relatability to ensure your readers form a meaningful connection.
  • Access constructive feedback on your writing style, preserving your voice while refining clarity.
  • Walk away with a roadmap for improvement. My evaluation includes actionable suggestions and strategies to implement positive changes.

What’s in it for you?

  • You’ll get a manuscript evaluation via email (5 to 7 pages). 
  • The manuscript evaluation will focus on point of view, characterization, beginning and ending, plot, writing style, and chapter organization.
Library of Halldór Laxness, Icelandic Nobel Prize winner. 

Things to note

  • Manuscript evaluations take 8 to 10 weeks.
  • I don’t read all fiction genres. Here are the genres I don’t read: horror, science fiction, young adult.
  • A manuscript evaluation does not include editing services
  • A manuscript evaluation is not a guarantee of publication
  • The maximum number of pages acceptable is 200.
  • Manuscripts must be submitted in standard format: A4, one-inch margins, Times/Times New Roman, 12-point type, double-spaced.

Price: $7.50 CAD/page. Final price to be agreed on based on services required. Flexible payment plans are available.

Ready to Take the Next Step?

Please fill out my intake form, and I will respond within two business days. 


1hr post-evaluation consultation

This hour is to discuss any questions regarding the manuscript evaluation.

Consultation price: $75 CAD

Coaching sessions 

Get personalized coaching for six months to achieve your writing goals. We can meet to break writer’s block with specific techniques or discuss the technicalities of fiction writing.