Congratulations on completing your fiction manuscript! Now that you’ve taken the most significant step, you can receive a developmental edit (or structural edit) encompassing plot structure, character development, pacing, and more.
I go beyond surface-level observations, providing in-depth feedback to help you enhance every aspect of your narrative.
- Receive feedback on character depth, growth, and relatability to ensure your readers form a meaningful connection.
- Access constructive feedback on your writing style, preserving your voice while refining clarity.
- Walk away with a roadmap for improvement. My evaluation includes actionable suggestions and strategies to implement positive changes.
Testimonials
“Where other prospective editors complained about my large word count and book length, Lola happily took on my project. From our first call, I knew I wanted to work with her, and boy am I grateful.
Never before, had I felt so seen and appreciated for my writing. She encouraged me to keep pushing through my final draft and I was grateful for all the suggestions and insights she provided in my treatment.”
— Koreem Gboneme
“Working with Lola on my debut novel, Brimstones and Rainbows: Memoirs of a Child Bride, was an absolute pleasure. She is truly a skilled wordsmith and editor who knows her onions. I loved every aspect of working with her, from her attention to detail to working within a structured timeline.
Guess who I contacted for my debut poetry collection, Emerging? She’s that good, and I will choose her again.”
— Ololade Akintoye, Author
A few Books I’ve edited
What you get
- A written report sent via email (5 to 7 pages), focusing on point of view, characterization, beginning and ending, plot, writing style, and chapter organization.
- Comments within your manuscript with suggested changes
Things to note
- A developmental edit takes 8 to 10 weeks.
- I don’t read all fiction genres. Here are the genres I don’t read: horror, science fiction, young adult.
- A developmental edit does not include editing services.
- A developmental edit is not a guarantee of publication.
- The maximum number of pages acceptable is 200.
- Manuscripts must be submitted in standard format: A4, one-inch margins, Times/Times New Roman, 12-point type, double-spaced.
Price: $7.50 CAD/page. Final price to be agreed on based on services required. Flexible payment plans are available.
Ready to Take the Next Step?
Please fill out my intake form, and I will respond within two business days.
Add-ons
1hr post-edit consultation
This hour is to discuss any questions you may have regarding the developmental edit.
Post-evaluation consultation fee:$60 CAD (20% discount applied)
Coaching sessions
Get personalized coaching for six months to achieve your writing goals. We can meet to break writer’s block with specific techniques or discuss the technicalities of fiction writing.